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Review:teh tarik says:

Right, sorry for the caps. Was looking through your author's page for something I haven't read (but I think I've read most of your oneshots) and then I remembered that I read and reviewed a few chapters of this story last year ^.^ So I'm glad to be able to catch up on Darcy and Louis and their little Hogsmeade date.

Goodness, now I remember what a firecracker she is! It's true, she has so many lines of win against Louis, and for once, it's nice to read a fic where the OC is the one with the sharp wit and the quick comebacks :) Darcy certainly did better than Louis here. But that last moment toward the end of the chapter! I think she might have gone a bit too far when she says she can stop pretending to enjoy herself. So Louis was affected by that remark of hers. Ooh. Something is blooming between the two and it's name is (possibly) Darlouis. Or Larcy.

Anyway. Lucy and Lysander were hilarious, running in and out of the scene, and Lysander's complete inability to confess his feelings to Lucy and all. They really do make an adorable couple - I'm with Darcy on this. And ooh, just what is Dee going to do?

Anyway, I really loved this chapter! It's light and funny and just generally full of fun and fluff! Great work :)


Author's Response: HI TEH!
Darcy is quite the personality, isn't she! Haha!I love coming up with all of her one-liners and responses to Louis's teasing, especially because some of the things she says woud make me blush terribly if I tried to say that to someone with a straight face! I think Darcy did go too far at the end of the chapter, but she doesn't realize that some of the things she says might actually make Louis feel bad. She thinks that because he teases her so much, and seems so calm and collected when she tries to out-wit him, that he won't be affected if she says something that's not all that nice. And I can't wait for your reaction to how they interact in future chapters! There may be a Darlouis or Larcy yet!
Lucy and Lysander are so much fun for me to write because they can actually see reason in all of Darcy's craziness! And Darcy won't rest until they get together so don't worry too much about that! I will say that it might not happen in the way you expect, though...
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you so much for the review!
Cassie :)

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