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Review:Lululuna says:
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This is so sad!! I really liked the idea and how it was written after the war. Draco was very appealingly portrayed as well: I liked how though he had changed and joined up with the Order, he still maintained some of his arrogance and anger and was true to character.

You have some very nice imagery, such as " throwing her head back and enjoying the rustle of the wind around her as it kissed her tender body." I thought that was a great childhood image to associate with her, and it really set the poetic tone for the rest of the story.

I'm not sure how I feel about Malfoy as a victim of child abuse, but as that's your choice as a writer I think you handled it gracefully. The idea of Malfoy ending his life with the same curse that had taken Catherine's was tragic, but once again rationally handled and tastefully described. I thought the repetition of the phrase "Come with me" was effective in tying the piece together as well. :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am glad you liked the idea of this. Being an AU of sorts, I wasn't sure if I portrayed Draco well but I am glad you liked him and felt he was still true to his character.

I absolutely love reading and writing imagery so I am pleased you liked what I did. Poetic tone, really? Yay! I am so happy I achieved that effect.

Well, I felt that Draco may have been subjected to child abuse now and then, as Lucius always seemed so harsh and cruel as a father. I played around with various possibilities of Draco taking his life, and then decided on it being the killing curse as it seemed most fitting. I am pleased you think it was rationally and tactfully done. I had never attempted such a writing style before, of a repetition of a certain phrase, so I am glad it worked.

Thank you so much!


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