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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was a cute little story. I liked your portrayal of Victoire as this really smart person and at the same time so sarcastic, yet good at heart. Your style of narrative was quite different but made for a light entertaining read. I liked how you expressed aspects of Victoire's personality through various scenarios, quite nicely done. The ending was really sweet too =)

All in all, this was a nicely written one-shot. It could do with some polishing, like in the sentence structure, flow, and grammar areas, but apart from that it was okay.

Good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked Victoire, she has an outershell made of ice and she's really cold but deep down she's got a good heart and she's a good person.

It took me a while to come up with the ending because I didn't know how I should end it but this finally came out and it was a good ending so I left it like that.

I'll definitely look into polishing this up a bit more (to the best of my ability).

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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