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Review:eevonne says:
ONCE AGAIN - you kill me. True, i thought you had broken my heart before and then i read THIS and i am shattered.
you are too good my friend, far too good.

I think my favorite thing about this story is that i feel like even though i know whats going to happen (talking about the original HP story, ya know?) I feel like this story that you are writing could have happened, like a sub story within the story itself.

I absolutely loved how honorable Draco is. Instead of doing what, i think, we all wanted to happen, he comes clean and finally tells her the truth. Like, c'mon man, stop making me love him!

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: eevonne,

Awe, this chapter was truly written to break hearts. ;( They went from nearly making love to breaking apart forever. I do love these two together, but war is upon them and there is no way for them to find their way through the darkness. Him being the enemy is just too much for her. It is certainly shattering for them both.

This is definitely a story within the original and it is wonderful to hear that you feel it could've happened. I'm trying to keep it within the realm of possibility and i will admit, it can be very difficult at times.

You love him? Well... there have already been a few reviewers that have married him already. LOL! I think I have made him too pefect, but I do try to keep him flawed. He should NEVER have used an Unforgivable on her!

I am working on the next chapter, but want to warn you that my chapter updates are slow. I am committed to the story though and do write when I can.

Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews. I do hope you come back for more.

Welcome to the world of Reviewing. :)

Dark Whisper

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