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Review:Courtney Dark says:
How are you such an amazing writer!? Give me some of your skills, please! This chapter was just perfect. I adore the dynamics and different relationships between the marauders and Lily, Alice and Belle. And you've managed to make each character so amazingly different, which is always great to see.

I loved that description of Lily's temper: 'That it was like witnessing a tornado touch down into the middle of a wild fire, causing embers to be hurtled in every direction' because I have always imagined Lily to be quite hot-headed.

James and Lily's conversation was so sweet and perfect. And oh my god, that line "We have all the time in the world" made me want to cry! However, I loved the little scene with Sirius and Belle in the bushes. They are two awesome characters and spying on his best mate seemed like a very Sirius thing to do!

I love (wow, I use the words 'I love' quite a lot when it comes to your story) the way you have portrayed Peter's character. I'm so glad he showed his Gryffindor qualities in this chapter - he's actually quite likeable, at this stage!

The Quidditch game was a nice, fluffy way to end the chapter. I can definitely see both James and Sirius as being poor losers and I really liked the idea of Lily playing as seeker. I've never really imagined her as much of a Quidditch player, so that was cool to see.

Another perfect chapter, of course!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: I don't even know what to say to all your nice words, haha. But I can't even tell you how happy it makes me that you're enjoying this.

I know this sounds mean, but I'm so happy that line made you sad. It nearly broke my heart when I typed it, ha!!

Oh gosh feel free to use the word 'love' as much as you want in these reviews :P!

I don't think Lily would be very good at Quidditch. Good enough to do well, but not good enough to play on the team or anything. Poor Lily, haha!

Thank you so much Courtney ♥ You're so awesome!


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