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Review:Lululuna says:
Okay, so I am one of those people who starts reading a story, loves it, then is way too excited to leave any reviews in favour of continuing to read.

This, however, is not fair because you deserve reviews for this hilarious masterpiece. This is SUCH an original and hysterical idea. It took me a few to get over the sheer ridiculous awesomeness of the Wotter clan turning into crime lords, which is incredible as a fact to itself. The obvious fact that "our parents are the law" makes it even more ironic and perfect. However, the little details of your writing and characters are equally chuckle-inspiring.

Breaking into HOGWARTS? The safest place to hide anything valuable (unless it's a philosopher's stone... or a Horcrux)? Genius. Rose Weasley as a master thief? Fabulous. A scheming secret enemy, possible turncoat and clan of brawny criminals called the Fraternity? Even better.

I'm going to conclude this gush-fest by highlighting some of my favourite bits of this chapter alone.

1. "THERE IS ENOUGH ROOM FOR JACK ON THAT RAFT TOO...!" and "Watch this, it's the sequel"

2. "And how is it even possible to forget your TWINS birthday?"

3. "GUESS WHAT? I'M PREGNANT! Leave a message!"

4. "Notice she wasn't complimenting me, just my dress. Which I had borrowed from her."

5. "I became aware that I stank of eau-de-Thames." The whole scuba-diving abduction incident was just hilarious all around."

Anyway, as you can probably tell I'm totally smitten with this story and am very amused by all the characters, particularly Rose and her sassiness. I shall go read more now. :)

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