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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello! I’m here with your third out of eight reviews :D

Aw I felt quite bad for Cousin Florence, the way she was forced into marrying that man from the Ministry, and she couldn’t have a fun wedding, and the way she gave her shoes to Molly seemed to symbolise that she was giving up her dancing and passing on the mantle. It was a really poignant part of the story.

I never had Molly down as a dancer, but it was really adorable to see how affected she was by Cousin Florence, and how much dancing meant to her. It really showed what a young vivacious girl she was once, and it was almost sad to see her have to give up the dancing to be a parent and wife.

I really liked seeing how mesmerised Arthur was by her dancing, as it, again, reinforced how much Molly had changed from how we saw her in the books. She seemed so bright and happy that I almost wanted to really get to know this young Molly too. You really captured that tender first love people feel when they meet that person, and it was lovely to read.

I never would have thought they would meet in a muggle, as in my canon they got together at Hogwarts, but this worked well too, and it showed a more risqué side to them, and of course it fitted in with the dancing which was great.

This was another lovely one-shot from you!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Ahh I feel so bad- you've left me all these stunning reviews and I've taken so long to reply to them! This week's been kinda hectic (exams coming :/)

I'm not entirely sure where this idea came from- I just have a sort of head canon that Molly was bit more adventurous and risque before she settled down and got married...
I'm glad that you liked Cousin Florence- I certainly loved writing her! I do feel sort of bad about giving her a sad ending!

The POV change in the middle is something I was quite unsure about, it's good to hear nice things about Arthur! That feeling "tender first love" as you put it, is pretty much what I was hoping to evoke with this, so you can imagine how great it is to hear that! Yeah, I know that JKR kind of implies that they got together at Hogwarts, but I really wanted to write this idea! (I'm a great believer in the power of a pair of shoes :P)

It's so great to hear that you enjoyed this! Thankyou for another lovely review from you! :)

-Bethany


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