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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here to review your entry for my challenge.

Aw this was such a sad and heartbreaking piece. It almost had me in tears. I think you wrote Ginny's grief and pain really well. It was sad that Lily took her life and because of bullying. The letter was very touching also. The ending broke my heart too. It was all really very sad. You did complete justice to a mother's grief on losing her daughter. Harry was quite in character as well.

The only CC I have is that your grammar/tense was a little off in some places. I'd suggest re-reading and fixing some awkward phrasing and tense mistakes, or getting a beta to look at them for you.

Apart from that, this was a very heart-wrenching yet beautifully written piece, and it had me engrossed. Great descriptions, flow, and intensity.

Thanks for participating in my challenge, the results should be announced in a few days/weeks.

-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: ey,

I think the bullying/suicide thing is something that is never touched on or mentioned a lot, but it happens and it's horrible.

I've been meaning to get a beta for a while but I haven't got round to it, I'll be sure to check the mistakes though!

Thanks you for reviewing!

-Potterfan310
Soph :D


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