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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here to review your entry for my challenge.

Wow, what a beautiful piece of writing. I really liked your portrayal of Draco and Hermione, and of their eternal love. It was so fairytale-ish and I enjoyed it. The way you set this years into the future, with Draco the last living man of his era, and unveiling the statue of Hermione and revealing to everyone that they got married in her final days - it was all very innovative and interesting. I liked your writing style, descriptions and use of vocabulary as well. I especially liked the ending, it was so heart-wrenching yet peaceful in a way.

You did a great job writing this. I loved it! Thank you for participating in my challenge. The results will be out in a few days/weeks. Whether you win or not, you should know that this was a very beautiful and well-written piece of work.

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: AD,

Hello, there. Thanks so much for your inspiring challenge. It got me to finally write out this story that had been in my head for quite a long time.

It it sort of fairytale-ish, but still very sad that he could only have her for such a short time.

Thank you so much for your compliments on the storyline and style. Someone commented on my "writing style" long ago and I thought... gosh, I didn't even know that I had one. Shows how much I know. :)

And yes, now that you mention it, it was rather peaceful in the end. He was the last and was ready to go with her.

Well, thank you again for your challenge and especially for finishing it. So many start them and never follow through and that can really knock the wind out of writers, you know? So thanks so much for that. Win or not, I'm just happy that you are seeing it to finish.

Thanks again for your lovely review. Much appreciated.

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper


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