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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here to review your entry for my challenge!

Wow, what an absolutely beautifully written piece! I really was captivated by your amazing descriptions. The way you have written the narrative fits so well with the time period. I love little William already! And the baby Helena sounds so adorable. The promise in the end struck a chord with me, it's weird how later on in life they're going to grow up and he's going to fall in love. I never imagined them to have a thirteen-year-difference though, but still fits well! I am enjoying the story so far, this is definitely a very enthralling and strong start. I am eager to meet the other characters like Slytherin and Helga, and how things will play out further. I wonder if you'll do a time jump?

Anyway, an awesome chapter! I am pleased you have entered this for my challenge. The results should be out in a few weeks. I hope the next chapter is posted soon though, I'd like to read another chapter before I judge.

Anyway, awesome job! I loved your descriptions, writing style, dialogues, and imagery. This flowed very smoothly and was all very beautiful. Great job!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey AD,

I'm so sorry it's taken ages for me to respond to this lovely review! The next chapter has been sitting patiently, waiting for me to complete it, whilst work took over my life completely.

Thank you so much for the inspiration for this story, I really am enjoying writing it. And thanks for the Special Mention! That was very cool of you.

The age difference will sort of come into play with their relationships with Helena's parents... But it just felt natural to me, anyway. Probably the influence of all the historical fiction I read!

Thanks so much again


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