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Review:potterfan310 says:
I LOVE George, he is like the most awesomest father in the world. He's amazing and I can see it now, he would be the 'cool, hip' dad.

Ooh I sense that maybe Roxy and Scorp are in a relationship, that's why their always together. It'd be an intresting thing to happen since it's normally Rose/Scorpius.

Aww, Freddie is so adorable bless him. Reading up on pregnancy and telling James all the different things. Well done him! :)

I feel bad for Annie since Freddie is sorta leading her on, because deep down he knows he really loves Ryan. Fryan for ever! ♥ ♥

"Painting my chest was a bad idea?" - I think this just about says it all about George!!! Crying with laughter :D and this is why I LOVE the Weasley family. ♥

They should definitely get a dog 'shop mascot' and it should be a Lab. ♥ It'll be fun to see Freddie trying to take care of a dog before he has to take care of a baby.

Just one little thing, 'my pants were torn' Britpicking, it would be trousers not pants.

Can't wait for the next one, I'll certainly be on the look out for the Doctor Who referance!! And I have and inkling that the something that catches Freddie off guard is Ryan, maybe?

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

Author's Response: Reviewzilla! YUSS.

George is definitely one of my favorites. I love writing future-George. He's so complex, which I love.

I'm sick of all the Rose/Scorpius. Just becasue they are almost the only canons of a similar age that aren't related. More Scorpius/Other Characters! Revolt!

FRYAN.

Freddie would just sort of poke at the dog. "What do you want? USE YOUR WORDS." and so on.

Britpick away :) I am not British and therefore most of the story will have plenty of words I am very used to. I have also never been to Great Britian. I should have disclaimered that. but thank you all the same!

Thank you so much for the review :) Hope you enjoy the next chapter!


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