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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
:( Such a heartbreaking chapter! But you wrote it so well! :) I think this was exactly what was needed--this is a tragic story so it only makes sense to have tragedy appear in a major way. But the fact that Draco tells Hermione he truly loves her and always will while she's under his Imperius curse and she wants to take everything back just breaks my heart! Even though you say you had a lot of trouble writing this chapter, it turned out phenomenal (as always). :)

Remember that long time ago when I asked if I could reference your Argentine tango one-shot in one of my future chapters of LMM? Yeah, I still have yet to get to that chapter...certain plot points have caused me to detour from doing that, so I'm not even sure whether or not I'll still have them do that. If I do, I will make sure to give you credit where your credit is due. :)

Great job as always with this chapter, I'm anxiously anticipating the next! xx
~MadiMalfoy

Author's Response: MadiMalfoy,

Oh, this really was a heartbreaking chapter and this story was meant to be a tragedy, you are so right. These two have been doomed from the start and this was the height of their love together... and then the crash.

Yes, he told her that he loved her, but she could not speak. Oh, the poor dears will have to live with what was said for a long while. Boo hoo. The war has begun and they will be separated for a time, but hopefully with magic he won't have to be completely alone without her. :(

Oh yes, the tango story... No problem at all. Trust me when I say that I completely understand how a story changes and moves in unexpected ways as we write them, so that's fine. Use it or not, it was wonderful to hear that I inspired you in some way.

Thank you for your many compliments on a chapter that was extremely difficult for me to write. There shall be more...

Thank you much,
Dark Whisper


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