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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Aw that was so adorable! :'D

However, I noticed this one teeny-tiny little mistake:

"Honestly, your best excuse is that, I quote, 'it's complicated.' Merlin, {your} complicated!" She exasperatedly ranted.

It's just the wrong 'your'. It should be 'you're'. :p

Other than that, I really liked this one-shot! I love Draco/Astoria, and I think you've written them really well!

:D

10/10

Author's Response: Hai-hai! I thought it was about time to respond to your reviews, so here we go :)

I'm glad that you thought I written Draco and Astoria rather well. I was afraid about Draco's character to be honest. This being the first time I've ever written him (I think I've mentioned that already in my author's note), I was sort of nervous, thinking I've made him too melodramatic or something.

And the use of "your", yeah, I didn't catch that. Usually my word processor would catch errors like that, and I always read things before sending it through validation, but both my processor and I always seems to miss things somehow. I'm planning on going through an editing stage once school's out of the way...fix all my stories up.

Thank you lovely for reviewing and your rating. a 10/10. That surprised me, seeing how this was my first for both characters. Thank you. Thank you so much!


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