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Review:TheHistoryGirl says:
I was actually delighted that you requested a review from me on the forums because after the amazing feedback you gave me on my own story (which I am yet to respond to) I intended to come and review some of your own material. I am amazed by how stunning your writing style is; everything sounds so eloquent and crafted in my head. I'm really in awe of your talent. I loved everything about this. I liked the way that you characterised the protagonist, the way that you described Andromeda's fury and anguish, and especially the way that you gave Theo Nott such a redeeming role in this story. It's nice to imagine that there were Slytherins who existed other than Snape who were brave enough to stand up and fight against Voldemort.

The ending to this was very powerful. I almost want to feel sorry for the protagonist but you've made him out to be so comfortable in his malevolent nature that I just can't be. His characterisation was very well done; the direct contrast between his powerful love for his son and his cold, brainwashed view of muggles and non-supporters of Voldemort made him seem both immensely intriguing and completely realistic.

Thank you for recommending this, it was a truly enjoyable read and if I have any more time this week I'll drop by to read more.

THG

Author's Response: Hi there, I'm really happy that you liked the review. I loved your story, and you'll have to let me know when the next chapter is up! :)

THank you so much for this lovely review. Hearing that you liked the story and the writing style is really amazing to hear.

I really enjoyed writing this, especially the Andromeda part. I seem to really love writing about Slytherins redeeming themselves, and I'm glad you thought it was effective!

It's great to hear you also liked the personification of Nott- it is very complex since he's a loving father but also a cold-hearted Death Eater, and how those two selves can exist together. So nice to hear you thought that was realistic. :) I look forward to any thoughts you might have on the other chapters, as they are along the same canon as this chapter but focus on different characters!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this, I loved your review!! :)


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