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Review:TheHistoryGirl says:
Hi there, it's THG here from the forums with your requested review.

First of all I thought I might begin by mentioning that I absolutely adore those extreme stories that either have lots or no dialogue; they really test the talent of writers such as yourself and they're so inspiring and thought-provoking because of their ability to force the reader to extend their imaginations. This was really no exception. I thought you did a very good job with the ambiguity of it all and I really liked the powerful themes that you have running throughout this.

If I had to be critical I'd say that you were perhaps too ambiguous at some points; maybe a bit too poetic or lost in your own writing. I often find that stories such as these ones are better left short and sweet; like Hemingway's work for example. Never the less this was still a terrific piece.

Now I know that the summary said other canon/OC so I'm sort of stumped about who this could be about. I figured because you mentioned red hair this could be something to do with the Weasleys. I'm probably way off but it was nice that I was able to guess.

Your writing style is very beautiful and I love that you have clearly taken the time and effort to craft this.

This was a great little read and I'm glad that you recommended it!


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