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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Louis is so lovely and sweet and a great healer. I love that he stayed with Jonah and made him feel comfortable, reassuring him when he had questions and worries. I just wanted to hug them both.

Why won't his parents be there after taking the others to the train? That's just so sad. ;(

I'm both nervous and looking forward to Louis working with the research team, maybe more than Louis actually is. :P I keep thinking don't be mean to him. But I know he can prove himself. :D

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter and the interaction between Louis and Jonah, I had a lot of fun writing that scene. As for Jonah's parents, well they also have work and they had been taking a lot of time off to spend at the hospital with Jonah so I was just being a bit realistic, but really that's just Jonah's young mind worrying as I'm sure it's safe to assume that both his parents eventually made to the hospital later that day after they were finished at work. ;)

Yes, there will be drama coming for Louis, just you wait. He hates drama so I feel it's necessary to stir up a huge heaping pile of drama for him to deal with because I'm the author and I can do that. :P Thanks for reviewing! Hope you continue to enjoy it, chapter six is posted now!

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