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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Tag!! (It's about time I read something of yours anyway!! :P)

This was a very interesting and well-written piece, dear! It just sort of jumped out at me when I saw the title because one of my favorite bands has a song called "Burning Bright", which I really love.

I've read a couple of pieces that deal with Regulus' thoughts, but none so far have been quite this in-depth (at least that I can remember). And of course I absolutely LOVE the star analogy!

As I started reading, I was overcome by wondering "What would have happened if Sirius and Regulus had spoken? Would they have apologized, made up? Fought together to bring Voldemort down?" And then as I read on and Regulus actually thought about contacting Sirius for help, it made those thoughts/feelings even stronger. That I can remember, no other Regulus story has caused me to wonder about those things, so HUGE kudos to you for being able to get me in that mindset; it just goes to show how talented you are!

The plot, flow, pace, everything is great, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors either. Great job dear, 10/10!!

Author's Response: Ooh hello there!

I'm so glad that you found his thoughts to be in depth, as I really wanted to get into them as I always wondered what he must have thought in those last few days of his life. And I'm so glad that you loved the star analogy too!

Haha I'm glad that you were overcome by wondering about what they may have done, as I was too. I was almost tempted to go completely AU and make them BFFs :P I hope that Regulus wanted to make it up with Sirius, so I'm glad that you wondering the same too!

Yay for no spelling or grammar errors! Thank you for this lovley review:D

-Kiana!


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