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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
It was Dora! This entire time, it was Dora! I have to admit, I did not suspect her at all. I suspected a Ravenclaw first year several times, but I never suspected specificly her.

This explains a bit about her view on the Malfoys, too. She wasn't angry at them because they betrayed Voldemort, she was angry because they served Voldemort and got to keep their fortune.

Well done! I am quite happy with the way you wrote this chapter.

We still don't know what's up with Blackburn, though. It's clear that Blackburn is a good person. I feel that Dora was forcing her to do something though...

The thing with Blackburn confused me even more than before.

I wonder if something similar could have happened with Blackburn ( meaning that she changed her name from Blackburn)

Hopefully we'll find out Blackburn's story next chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry, but Blackburn's story won't be revealed until Year 2. The first chapter of Year 2, though, so you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Her story is rather separate from Dora's, so far anyway. *grins* And you're meant to be confused at the moment.

And yup, Dora was basically jealous that the Malfoys weren't punished when Lucius Malfoy was far closer to Voldemort than Nott Sr.

Glad you liked the chapter and the revelations.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing all of the story so far. I've really loved reading your thoughts and your theories.


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