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Review:iatevoldysnose says:
Ack. Lovely chapter. I think think this was worth the wait. I've been checking everyday to see whether you'd updated this story haha:)
It's so adorable how Al is so worried about Lucy, and it's just so cute when he felt the 'spark'.

At times I just can't help but think, Albus, can't you see that Lucy fancies you and can't Lucy see that Albus fancies her! It's so obvious although it might just be to me, but not for them. They would be such an awesome couple.

Albus is possibly one of my favourite next gen characters and you just portray him so well. I love the chapter names btw, they're quite original:)
Oh and I love the names of the stories too.

Love reading this story:) it's so wonderful.


p.s. when do you think you will be able to next update?

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I felt like this chapter was a bit disjointed because I wrote half of it, went away for a couple weeks and then came back and wrote the other half. But I'm glad it worked out well. I think the Al and Lucy being blind thing is because we see a lot more as readers than they do as characters. Plus, when you think about it, often when you really like someone, you are so afraid of rejection that you keep looking for really definitive proof of the other person's feelings and unless they come out and say that they like you then you don't believe it's worth the risk. At least I know I was like that as a teenager.

I'm glad you like the characters :) I'll try to update soon but I can't really promise anything. I'll do my best :)

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