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Review:Brinda says:
Aaaaha it was Fawkes!! :D yay i guessed it right!! this chapter was a good long read it answers the questions i had before but then a 100 more questions crop up in my mind..its like a vicious circle of questions giving my imagination an over-time!! Love the way the characters are shaping up. In this chapter Dom, as a character has got my attention you think you know her but then she is a mystery. James-Amy even though its early to jump to any conclusions i must say they kinda remind me off James and Lily senior (before James senior deflated his big head!!) even though their interaction was limited. I would like to finish of this review by saying this is one of the best post-deathly hallows fan fiction i have read with a good and strong story line, the plot of which doesn't depend on fluff!! As usual i Sirius-lee missed Sirius..looking forward for the plot to thicken.. ;)

Author's Response: Yes you were correct! Sorry I couldn't confirm earlier. But it's more fun this way, right? :D

This chapter did answer a few question, but you are correct. It probably leaves more unanswered. I had fun writing Dom in this chapter. Even though she didn't get a lot of lines she did have a lot of development and showed a different side a little bit.

James/Amy is an early jump and honestly I don't even know for sure. It's something I'm playing around with in my head, but I'm not sure if anything will or won't happen in the long run. Right now there is a strong possibility (because I too am trying to draw the James/Lily parallel), but they are still young. But more on that in the next chapter.

Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment! That really made my day! :)

Haha, Sirius will be in the next chapter (probably next two or three, actually). Sirius Lee, no joke, I'm back to his point of view more often now. ;) The next chapter should be up tomorrow and hopefully I can finish the next one so it'll be up soon too. :D

Thank you for the review. ;)
Taz


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