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Review:Solana says:
I'm impressed by your writing which his as good as I've seen on here, and I've seen some good ones! I love this story and it's one of those I can't WAIT to see updated. Please, please update real soon!

I love Scorpius. He's a sweetie deep inside. He doesn't always behave that way (almost never actually), I think because he doesn't see himself as good. He doesn't see himself as very smart, either. He's a lot smarter than he acts. Hopefully he and everyone else will come to see how good he is -- as good as Tim sees him at least.

You've promised more on their relationship as well.

And, of course, as good as Rose will eventually have to see him. Hermione is starting to see him that way -- which as someone said puts him in good stead for when he's with Rose.

Al in this is everyone's favorite big brother! But I do have to agree he is indeed afraid he's not measuring up to his hero father. Scorp was right even though he shouldn't have said what he did. But he wasn't wrong and sometimes a best mate comes up with the truth you don't want to hear.

Of course, he was venting and Al understandably got tired of that. They will make up, right?

I like Selena, too. More on her, I hope.

Oh, the parts where Scorp is screaming at the Ravenclaw riddle door are absolutely hilarious! It makes me love him more! I know he's adjusted to it by now but it was our comic relief and he's good at providing that.

Anyway, all in all a great story and you can go in so many directions with it. Of course, I'm a sucker for happy endings so I'm hoping you'll give these kids theirs ... :-)

Now ... update. Pretty please!

Author's Response: I do try to keep the comic relief in this story. It's an important part, this isn't super-serious doom and gloom and angst despite the serious things going on; I prefer to juxtapose my tone (while not making it whiplash-inducing). It gets hard around this part, especially when Scorpius is sulking. But it shall keep up!

Thanks for reviewing!


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