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Review:Fawkes394 says:
Hi! I enjoyed this chapter a lot, though James did scare me a bit at the beginning, for a moment I thought he had either gone crazy or was way too drunk. It was kind of hilarious in a very sad way to see how he depressed everyone so much with his philosophical speech, he nearly brought everyone to tears. He almost made me cry, it must be awful to be rejected so many times by the same person...

Just to let you know, I'm addicted to your story. I love all the fluffiness mixed with the sadhappy things, if that makes sense at all. Ellie is a really special character and I like all the other people around her, specially Scorpius. He's so cute and crazy and weird! There should exist more people like him... I really enjoy reading about your characters.

And your questions:
I think Remus/Tonks story fits perfectly, Ellie is a lot like Remus. They both have important reasons not to want getting close to people, but they can be really exasperating.

Lily is cool now, I don't get why she hated Ellie so much in the first place, but she has matured a lot.
And poor Albus! I get why he gets so scared when his siblings are in pain, it happens to me when my sister is sad. I usually react differently, though. I freak out whenever I see tears, so I usually don't ever help too much...

Update soon?

Author's Response: I can't seem to write a story without someone going a little insane. Eh, it adds to the drama, and I think James really pulls it off.

Ah yes, rejection. I was hoping the little "Leo and Scorpius in the bathroom" flashback memory (hehe, I just re-read this sentence, hilarious) made his whole "I can't give up" motto seem more realistic. Or...I could just be too hopeful. All is well :P

You're addicted to this silly thing? AWESOME! I'm kind of addicted to writing it, so we equal out :D. Oh man, Scorpius is secretly my favorite (don't tell the others, they get jealous easily).

Ellie is really stubborn like Remus! Remus is awesome. I just had to add that.

Well, Lily is an interesting girl. Her hate originated from her ignorance (this gets explained more in the next chapter that will be up sometime next week. Life is a bit hectic right now, so I haven't had the time to finish it up).

Albus is extremely sensitive to everything. I believe this comes with his intuitive abilities. Unfortunately, I get really emotional when I try to help my siblings too. Let us suffer together!

Of course! :D Thanks for this lovely review


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