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Review:Ardeith says:
Sorry I'm late getting to this chapter.

Okay, I still don't like Timothy and he still reminds me of someone! I know he's not an evil guy (or if he is, you aren't really hinting at it, yet), but he seems kind of into himself. And overconfident about Beth's feelings for him.

As always, you capture that first date feeling so well. This is sooo real and the kind of detail that makes your story so good: "she naturally fell into step beside him, suddenly quite conscious of every step she too, every sound she made that she was never aware of making before".

Oh and poor Sirius! I mean, he did really pretty much ruin her life when she put it this way: "I can’t do mission work anymore. Nobody trusts me, Severus is gone – he doesn’t remember who I am. He had his memories of me erased because of you.” But I hate to see him down and I hate to see their friendship in tatters. Beth needs him, you know. Now he should be really motivated to get Sev's memories back!

Author's Response: Absolutely no apologies necessary, Ardeith. :) I'm beyond pleased you've stuck with me this long in the first place!

Timothy is largely /based/ on someone, so that actually doesn't surprise me -- he's painted a bit with a suspicious brush! I can't say what he turns into, as far as this story is concerned, or if he turns into anything, but what you said about his overconfidence is probably very, very accurate.

I have experienced that first-date feeling first hand, being so aware of how you move and how you function when you've never noticed it before. It's scary! And poor Beth, having to go through that. ♥

Poor Sirius indeed -- all his former actions aside, he still got punched in the face, and that sucks no matter what you've done to deserve it! (Unless you're a heinous criminal or something, really.) But their friendship is in tatters, and I agree with you: I don't like it. :( But it is more motivation to help Beth out!

Ah, your reviews. They are always so, so nice, and I do hope you know how much I sincerely appreciate them. It's so nice just to hear from you every week and know you're doing all right, and your compliments are always lovely! ♥ Thank you, Ardeith!

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