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Review:FriendofMolly says:
marauder5,
You packed a lot into this chapter, for which I thank you. It was interesting that you had Ginny struggling with her future. More than a few stories have her either so brilliant during her trial that she is hired on the spot, or is led to believe that she will be. Ginny doesn't strike me as someone who puts all her pygmy puffs in one basket. She wondering what she might do instead made the arrival of Gwenog and the Coach that much more exciting. On the Harry front, why oh why would he buy a flat without mentioning it to Ginny? I do want to hear more about it, if he doesn't turn around and cancel the sale. We all know that Hermione gets her Ministry start in Regulation of Magic Creatures. Your version was more graphic than I've read. It makes sense though. One would think that a Phoenix wouldn't be around long enough to be cursed, I guess anything can happen. The problem werewolf sounds like he took more than lessons for Greyback, as Remus was child when he was bitten. Certainly a heartbreaking situation.
I want more!
FoM

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I really appreciate the fact that you always share your thoughts on the events of each chapter, it's really helpful!

I'm glad that you liked my take on Ginny reflecting on her future. It's just something that I can see happening as she watches all of her brothers succeed. (btw, I love that saying: she doesn't put all her pygmy puffs in one basket. Brilliant!) As for Harry's flat, you'll find out more in the next chapter. The werewolf probably admired Greyback quite a bit, and it's very sad indeed.

Thank you so much for your comments, and for reading this story. It makes me very happy :)


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