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Review:Loony_Scorpy says:
Oooh time skip.

I love the way you made Draco recognise that she was familiar because of the war (just the fact that he could see that look and he could understand her)

So much fog in this - I love that it can be related to so many things when I'd never have thought it could represent half as much.

Ooh yes I'm seeing the differences in the plot now (because somehow my horrible memory is actually recalling a little of what happened in your last version - or maybe I just think I remember and I'm actually making things up, who knows)

Ooh ooh I got really excited and intrigued when I read this bit, "The more Draco found his head full of fog, the more troubled became. So when he met Astoria Greengrass again later that day in the Leaky Cauldron and found out that she was a Healer, he knew he couldn't let her go." Has all of the modifying and things Draco's been doing started to reverse and seep into his brain like radiation effects or something or is someone else going into his brain or what? Very excited. I know you won't answer that though :P Oh! But fog and things could Astoria play a part in his mind? Did she do something to him years ago or did they have some sort of connection or something? I'm going to stop guessing things now before I keep rambling on and on about things I don't know!

I see you were part way through chapter three...how far to go now? ;) This must be a hell of a story to write though, so complex and mysterious and beautifully worded and all.

Looove this story ♥

Author's Response: Mysterious time skip, all timey-wimey and skippy~

There are...many plot differences. I'm not even sure what the current plot is, it's been so long since I tried to write this!

I should probably keep it quiet, haha! You'd be right in thinking the research has addled Draco's own mind - that's hardly a big plot secret, I was going to make it clear from the next chapter onwards :P As for Astoria, er, wait and see until the year 3000, when I will finally update this story...!

Thank you so much for your reviews! :3 ♥


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