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Review:Loony_Scorpy says:
I've been meaning to read this updated version for ages but I never got around to it so I'm finally here! Because I love your idea for this and I really hope you get the inspiration (and ideas and whatnot) to continue it :)

Firstly, I really love the blindfold simile (is that the right word for it? I've already forgotten everything I learnt at school oops) just this whole bit really, "Dusk fell like a blindfold that night. Slowly, stiflingly, it slipped across the sky and extinguished the damp grey gleam of the day as it went." The way you described it is just superb. I just really like that bit! (now I should probably read past the first two sentences).

Basically I love the way you have written this, especially the way you have described everything. Mostly the blood (it's probably quite weird that I liked that but I guess a lot people just leave it as red and dripping or something? and you actually made it seem real and kinda creepy and yeah I don't really know what I'm talking about right now...) and also the cold air with the knives and slitting. I just realised that pretty much my favourite parts are all of the grim sort of things. Oops?

Anyway moving on to the next chapter! (also I love how much you managed to fit into the chapter despite it being so short...it felt way longer!)

Author's Response: Oh god, don't remind me of how behind I am with this fic! This must be rewrite #2356...

Thank you! Although I feel most comfortable writing cracky, slapstick humour, I do love working on a big chunk of descriptive writing now and again, and I'm a sucker for metaphor.

Don't worry - my favourite parts are oft the grim things too. I've got a morbid imagination, me...

Thank you for your reviews :3 ♥


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