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Review:Avis123 says:
Love it! The progression of time from the first story to this one is superb, and you've tackled the relationship between Nel and James really well - they're adorable! Although, I can't help but be a bit annoyed at James for working all the time! Just a few questions, of course ;) :
- What happened to Cassie and her and Greg's child?
- Why did James lose contact with his family in the first place?
Great job, keep it up and update soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

I tried hard with the timing so all the characters had time to adjust to one another and so I just wasn't writing about Nel and James in the first puppy love, lusting after one another stage in their relationship. I did try hard to get characterisation right and their relationship right so thank you :)

Aha, James is James. He loves his work and doing a job like his calls for constant work. Nel is the opposite, the first time she worked on a weekend (excluding the Quidditch coaching, lets not bring that up) was the case of David Grimm. James on the other hand never stops (weekends, birthdays, holidays) much to Nels dismay. He's a workaholic.

Cassie had the child and it was a little girl named Vienna. Greg sees her every other weekend, not as much as he'd like though. Josie loves her and treats her like she's her own (of course, she's Josie). As far as Cassie's concerned she's off the rails. After the wedding and birth Cassie has been bringing a lot of 'new daddy's' home. But there will be lots of drama about the baby coming up.

Like I said, James is a workaholic. After he left Hogwarts he knew what he wanted. His family wanted to help him but he didn't want to be known as the man who let his famous parents buy him a future. James had a lot of anger deep down concerning his childhood and the wizarding press (that's why he hated journalists). This all came out in an argument with Harry and James walked out with only his share of the Potter fortune - no place to live, nothing. This happened when he was nineteen and his family sided with Harry, accept Lily and Ginny but Ginny is forced to not mention it at home and Lily gets away with seeing him due to her being the favourite child ;) the real thing is with James and Harry though.

Thanks for reading and keep reviewing and asking questions!
- Kelci x

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