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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is such an awesome story so far! I love how you introduce Eloise - you throw us right in there, with such an engaging opening.
The whole title is absolutely awesome - and I'm interested in to how you use that in your story.
I am so loving the minor characters - kudos for that - because minor characters don't get enough love and the characters you've picked are so fascinating.
I also love the simile of the butterfly. It's completely relevant, and show her character traits. I'm also thrilled that she's a puff and claw at the same time - a mixture is always awesome :P
The comments are pretty inventive too, though I still hate them -_- It's very realistic, especially that she turns to books for relief, and how effected she is by the bullying. It made me feel so sorry for her, because teenage kids can be so mean, and you really portrayed her as this innocent lovely girl. Brilliant character development and a nice narrative that keeps a steady yet compelling pace and also sets the tone brilliantly.
My favourite bit, was the pink glitter bit - that had me laughing a lot!
I'm looking forward to how Mclaggen comes in, more on her kneazle, and as long as Vincent isn't too mean it should be another fambubblybumshus story!

Author's Response: Hi, it's so good to see you!

LBD reference aside, I'm really happy to see you reading this story as well!

The title is a result of too much mathematics (six hours a week, not to mention the homework, can you imagine?) and yes we will find out how it fits, of course.

I had a little too much fun coming up with the comments, which proves your point entirely - teenage kids can be horrible. Sometimes I think I'd rather face Voldemort than the snide comments of a group of sixteen year olds.

Yes more on her Kneazle, of course! And on Vincent too...


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