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Review:MissMoneypenny says:
Hi!
I liked the new POV in this chapter, and how James is starting to like Hanne, but Sirius still doesn't- I thought that was clever. Also, I thought that Hanne teaching James to hex fitted really well, seeing as people think she's a sort of dark and murky person.

I thought you would skip ahead in years with this chapter, but actually I quite liked it and I guess it was a good platform for when we do reach Hanne's later years.

I can't wait to see Hanne and Sirius' relationship develop- and all of the Marauders, really, though we haven't met them yet.

Can't wait for more! 9.5/10
Miss Moneypenny :-)

Author's Response: Hi~

I'm glad you liked that I decided to not do a time skip C: tbh, I was thinking of doing it, but I don't think it shows enough about how any of the characters got where they are when they're older, so I'm gonna go ahead with this.

& I'm very happy you liked the POV change, and all the other things~ thanks so much for reading, I really enjoy your feedback!


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