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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
I love the story so far, I hope you'll excuse me for reviewing the first chapter then moving on to the second chapter to review. ;/

So, I like that the main character is Irish. What can I say? They've got amazing accents, their country is a snake-free one, their names are SO COOL (like Maeve. That's a cool name) and they give each other potatoes as presents! What's not to like? (For your information, I love potatoes.) NO, I'M NOT OBSESSED.

Hehe...I got slightly distracted there. Sorry?

Right, back to reviewing. Apart from the fact she's Irish, Maeve is an engaging character. I like the fact that she is endearingly clumsy, but with a reason. I mean, some characters are clumsy for no reason, and sometimes that's fine, but there are so many characters like that it gets annoying sometimes.

Now I just sound crazy. Moving on...

The only thing I can complain about is the backstory-why does she hate James so much?-but since I'm going on to the next chapter soon anyway, there's probably no point asking you questions.

Oh, and that trick at the end that backfired on James and Fred was genius. Just saying. :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I love this review so much! Haha- of course I don't mind you reviewing both chapters (in fact, I'm ecstatic! A girl'll take as many reviews as she can get) I'm ashamed to say that I'm Irish and have never given or received a potato as a present :( Perhaps next Christmas? :D

Thank you so much for your kind words about Maeve. I totally understand what you mean about some characters being unrealistically clumsy, sometimes enough is enough. (Although, who am I to talk? I'm seriously one of the most uncoordinated girls on the planet... No lie.)

I'm afraid you will just have to wait and see to find out! All will be revealed in due time >:) Thank you for reading and reviewing! xo

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