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Review:DumbledoresArmyOfOne says:
Hi!
This story doesn't seem to be getting nearly enough love for it's quality so I thought I'd pop in and tell you how brilliant it is!

I love the spin on Rasputin- he's such a creepy figure, and his allegiances are much contested, just like Snape.

The quality of writing is very good. There are a few odd word choices and some weird punctuation, but nothing a quick skim wouldn't fix, so that's always nice.

One thing you should watch are your tenses, though. Around the middle of the story they're a bit all over the place.

This is a really detailed, textured story. I love the little snippets of time: just a quick look into his mind and then zoom, off to the next one. It's almost like looking through a pensieve :D

I really love the story, it was very well done.

~Gilly

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! (:
I'm glad that you found the correlation between Snape and Rasputin obvious and not randomly made. I'll definitely be sure to go over the grammar once again! Thank you for pointing it out! I'm glad that you didn't find the time jumps confusing! I definitely wanted to portray all of Snape's life so that was just what worked out best for me.

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! (:
Claire


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