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Review:nott theodore says:
Well, I'm not really sure what I expected from this chapter, but (in the best possible way) I don't think this was it!

I really enjoyed the opening and the chance to see what is happening in 2022 and the attitudes of her family to their loss. It's clear that Dominique is being missed a lot more than she expected at home, especially by Victoire. I thought you wrote her grief and sense of loss very well.

The contrast between 2022 and 1234 was really interesting; it was as if we saw a reversal of roles between Victoire, who was planning her wedding and has now postponed it, and Dominique, who was quiet and has now begun planning her own wedding. I liked seeing the friendship between Dominique and Jocosa as well as the interaction with Ignotus, and Dominique's recognition that men don't like shopping, whatever time they're in, was really amusing.

I think the part that I really didn't expect was the ambush. Even though I'm undecided about Callum, I was really worried when I heard that he'd been wounded. Seeing Dominique go into action to save him highlights how much she cares for him, but it was also lovely to see her in her element, showing off the skills that her auror training rewarded her with. It's quite nice to see her acting how she would in her own time, and I think Ignotus, Callum and Edmund will all be shocked when they witness what she can do.

That cliffhanger! That's mean! I really want to know what happens and I hope that she's alright, as well as the others! I hope you update soon!

Also, I was wondering if you know how long this story will be yet?

nott theodore :)

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