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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi there, I'm here from the review thread!

First of all, I really liked the introduction of Teddy's problems. I think they did a good job of setting him up as a next generation character by referring back to the older characters, but also establishing his individual personality. Also, his grandmother a dragon?? Very intrigued.

I also like how Victoire is in Ravenclaw-nice change from the Weasleys dominating Gryffindor. The line about his chimpanzee smile was also quite hilarious, and it was just too perfect that Rose would want to watch National Geographic. I'm sure her mum would approve.

The part about the cactus made me laugh as well. How does one manage to kill off a cactus??! Also, it did not surprise me one bit that the greenhouses would have carnivorous and hazardous plants.

Loving the awkwardness. Clearly poor Teddy's mind is going a mile per minute. Their relationship seems very believable and cute, and it's refreshing to read Victoire not as an over-confident mean girl who can get any boy she likes (Fleur-style), but as nervous that Teddy doesn't like her back.

The repetition at the end was very effective too. I really enjoyed the story, it was fluffy and sweet and made me happy. :)

Author's Response: That introduction was difficult to write, so I'm glad you liked it! And Andromeda Tonks is nothing but a dragon - in the most complimentary sense possible.

The Victoire in my head fit better in Ravenclaw than she did in Gryffindor, I guess. And you can't have something like half the population of Hogwarts in Gryffindor, because they're all Potter-Weasleys! The chimpanzee thing was from an episode of The Wild Thornberrys - I have no idea why I remember it from so long ago, and it seemed fitting that Rose would be a National Geographic nut!

I've killed numerous cactii. The trick is too love them too much.

Teddy is just your average, awkward boy, with the not-so-average, awkward realisation that his best friend is the love of his life. My mind would be going at a mile per minute, too!

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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