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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I noticed that you and the next writer after you in the tag had both reviewed me, leaving you you without a review. So count this as compensation. =)

I really liked the idea of this one-shot. It was one of the most original fan fics I've read, and I wouldn't mind reading more about Derwent and his quest for finding his family. I do hope he will find them.

The wholesome backstory with gardening and happy family compared to his present state and being stuck in Azkaban was a really nice contrast. The ending where he tried to offer an apple to another dementor and then glided away still clutching it, was very visual scene. I could really imagine it in my eyes.

Excellent story. Maybe you could write more about Derwent? And of course, I'm very much interested in why dementors attacked his family. =)

Author's Response: That is so nice of you, thank you for thinking of me!! :P It's great to hear that you liked this one-shot, and that you thought it was an original POV. The idea just kind of came to me, and I thought it would be really fun to write!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the contrasts with Derwent's past life and his current one as a Dementor. I'm not sure why I picked him out as being a gardener, but it just seemed to strangely fit. Also good to hear that the scene with the apple was effective.

I haven't decided yet if I'm going to leave this as a one-shot or continue it-I really liked writing it but haven't quite re-discovered the muse for this story! But your feedback is very encouraging. :)

Thank you so much for the review, I really loved it!!! :)


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