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Review:Maelody says:
Hi! I want to thank Mazblue for getting me seriously interested into this story with her take on the audio of it. She really brings Spencer to life, doesn't she? :)

ANYWAY! I've been following along with the audio and this story and I wanted you to know that I really enjoy it! I love how snarky Spencer is and how real you keep her as a teenage girl. I also like James and how he had to lie just to see her again. I think it would actually be kind of cool to get to see into James' life and see what his parents think about this whole thing, but I also understand that this story already has some story left for me to read in it lol ;).

I think my favorite character besides the obvious two is Spencer's dad. I love him so much! I would be Spencer's new step-mommy if that wouldn't mean her father was doing the same thing her mother was doing with Freddy ;). Is that stepping over boundaries? Oh well haha. Anyway, I just love how he's a Facebook stalker (something I take full pride in being) and he still pines over his ex-wife. He just seems, really out of all of the characters so far, the most real to me! Not that the others aren't awesome, but I think you know what I mean? :D He loves his daughter very much, but the real world gets in the way sometimes.

I love the obvious connection with this story and the real Wonderland...Well, the Wonderland that we all know of...because Wonderland isn't real... Or is it? DUN. DUN. DUN. And I think that you summed up how she felt about Platform Nine and Three Quarters being her Wonderland perfectly. I'm sure if she ever stumbled upon Hogwarts though, her opinion of which place was her Wonderland would change quickly. This is where I relate with this character however, because I honestly realize the importance of needing and wanting to have an amazing place to go back to and think about, even if you think it is just a dream. That's why I continuously re-read the Potter books. It's my own personal Wonderland!

Honestly, the only thing I think I do not like about this story, and it is so minor it is absolutely worth not mentioning, but I will anyway just so I seem like I'm doing my job as a reviewer... AHEM. I don't really like how Spencer is portrayed as five foot. I feel like every female character ever is short, assumably under the height of five foot two and I think it's because a lot of people have the image of this perfectly adorable, small girl being absolutely defenseless and fitting perfectly in the masculine man's arms. That's just a personal pet peeve of mine. Probably because I am a five foot eight girl who would love to read about stronger girls who can STILL get the guy, but yeah... ;)

Still loved the story though, and I'm not going to stop reading just because I have a thing against fun sized people. (I don't really, I just thought that would be fun to say...) You've done a great job so far and I really can't wait to finish catching up with the rest of it!

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