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Review:AlexFan says:
I spotted a couple of grammatical errors while reading this but otherwise it flowed really well. Wow though, I did not expect that to happen between Rose and Scorpius. Scorpius just went completely crazy! I mean really, moving to Switzerland!

And I've heard that they speak English in Switzerland nowadays and all you'd need to know would be the names of the shops. I'm assuming that my friend was right about this, he usually knows a lot of random trivia.

I was with Rose on her reaction. I'm pretty sure that we would've had the same expression on our faces. I could just imagine her in my head with this look saying "I am not amused. Are you insane?"

Anyway, great job!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm aware of the errors, and I had litreally just edited it before you posted this review, so the (hopefully!) grammar error free version should be up soonish! Hahaha yeah I wanted to make Scorpius do something really rash, as otherwise they're break up wouldn't have been as convincing.

Yeah he might be, but I think Rose wasn't thinking that practically in that situation and was just having a major freak out!

I think most people would be with Rose on this one, her careers important to her, so it made sense for her to act the way she did!

I'm glad that you liked it,

-Kiana :D


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