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Review:marauder5 says:
I think that the characterization was great when it came to the reactions to Ginny's announcement. Of course Ron would overreact and start yelling, while Harry kept his anger bottled up, at least for a while. I'm sure Harry wouldn't have been comfortable with it, especially since you wrote in the last chapter how protective he was, both of Ginny and the baby.

I loved the part with George - he is such a great character, and you've certainly done him justice. My guess is that the girl in his bathroom was Angelina, since it was someone that Harry knew.

I'm also really glad that Harry and Ginny made up. Some serious mood swings, I guess. But with Ginny's normal temper, I'm sure she'd go a bit mental during pregnancy.

I can't wait to see what will happen when they meet with Astoria! This was really good :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to make sure none of our familiar characters have major personality changes from JKR's books. That's why we love them, right? I work very hard on characterization, so I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the review! Meeting Astoria will be...interesting. :) ~GW

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