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Review:Debra20 says:
Athene, are you by any chance George R.R. Martin in hiding? Have you grown bored with ASOIAF and decided to write a very similar, very amazing story regarding the Founders Era from Harry Potter? Cause you sure write like him!

I seriously have no words to fully express how MUCH I loved this first chapter. With the soundtrack from Lord of the Rings playing on the background, and your marvellous story-telling, I felt like I've left this Earth for the 15 minutes it took me to finish these 2000 words. I felt like I've entered a completely different world, a magical world bursting with the unknown and the possibilities and everything lovely that comes with exploring it.

Your flow is impeccable. Your character's voices are strong, each one with his own. Your wording seems very appropriate to that period and everything put together make this story a veritable, stand alone fantasy piece. Please, please tell me you'll write more and you won't leave it like this. I need to know more. I need to see the reunion of the four Founders. I need to see how you portrait of Salazar and see if he truly lives up to William's awe :D I am in love. This story is going straight to my favourites list!

Also, you used an image of Bran as a chapter image. I literally squealed at that haha

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so sorry it's taken me ages to respond to this wonderful review... Your first paragraph has had me grinning from ear to ear every time I look at my unanswered reviews. Yes! It is I, George R R Martin! Haha... I wish! Game of Thrones is awesome. I feel you may have been influenced by the wonderful chapter image that ColouredSkies made for this chapter!

Can I just say, your writing style in this review is absolutely beautiful? I know I'm not meant to be reviewing your review, but that second paragraph is lovely. And I'm delighted that you had that feeling of transportation! That's my favourite thing when I'm reading, and I always hope to do the same to my readers.

I cross my heart and hope to die, chapter 2 will be up soon! And then chapter 3 won't be far behind.

I love writing Founders, it turns out! And I love you for reading and reviewing it :)

Athene xo


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