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Review:marauder5 says:
hello! I think this chapter was brilliant, and it made me realize what I love about your writing. I've said before that you capture the dark characters so well, both in The Girl from Slytherin and the first chapter of this story. But I think that it's more the fact that you find the voice of your character and you write it perfectly. It's brilliant when you wrote Tor, when you wrote Mr Nott, and now, when you wrote Firenze. I can really see this being the thoughts of a centaur. It's amazing, and I think it's my favorite part about your writing, that you capture the voices of the characters flawlessly.

The actual story in this chapter was great too. I wonder who the boy is - my guess is that it's one of Daphne's friends. It can't be Pyxis, because he was in the other chapter inside Hogwarts. God, I hope it's not Theo...

Throughout the story, I expected Bane to change his mind. But then I realized it would be a bit of a cliché if he did. This was much better, if not for Firenze and the boy, for the sake of this chapter.

I guess that their fate will be revealed in the upcoming chapters? I can't wait to read more, this is story is actually as good as The Girl from Slytherin - I absolutely love it!! :)

Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you thank you!!! It's so great to get this positive response to this story because I'm still not quite sure how I feel about it. It's wonderful to hear that you felt Firenze was well captured, I enjoyed getting into his head a little, he always seemed so good, wise and long-suffering! I also figured it was time I tried writing a "good guy," haha!

I haven't really decided myself who exactly the boy was, to be honest. :P

This chapter was interesting to imagine because I suspected that not everything was rosy after Voldemort, and that instead the death of the common enemy left space for other groups like the centaurs to revolt. I thought the tensions between wizards and centaurs rose throughout the HP books, and this would be a good moment for them to make a stand.

It's so lovely to hear that you like this story-really, all your reviews always make me so excited haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D


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