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Review:DancingMooncalf says:
Hey,

It's a great start. After the prologue I couldn't wait for the story and see what you made of it. You did not dissapoint me. I'm very impressed at how natural you wirte the Slytherins. I had grown used to the fact that most people portait Slytherins as evil, which in not the case in your story at all. They grew up to believe different things, that's clear in the chapter.

You build up a lot of tension in the prologue that makes me want to keep on reading now to see where this is going. That chapter introduses us to the characters and toughts that are going to have their place through the story I guess. But still the tension from the prologue is lingering. That makes me super-curious and impatient to read more.

I think you wrote it really well. You didn't give away to much and still gave out some important information for the readers to know.
Well done!

Maya

Author's Response: Hello! I'm very glad to hear that you enjoyed the first chapter-I worried that it might be a little tame after the tension of the prologue. I hoped to demonstrate how the Slytherins are not naturally evil people, they've just been brought up with certain behaviours and ideals, which I try to challenge throughout the story.

It's great to hear as well that the tension from the prologue carries on! And I guess if you want to read on that is a good thing! I was worried about the first few chapters so getting this strong feedback is amazing. Thank you so much for reviewing, and I hope you don't mind that I'll be re-requesting! :)


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