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Review:rez says:
omg, does no one remember the original purpose of this?! to keep Beth safe and to make severus' life as a spy somewhat easier?! he'd completely break down if his memories just flooded back like that! what are you thinking, stupid children?!?

arrgghh. you're very good at this frustrating thing xD it's a good thing I thing. not stupidly predictable, I have no idea how this will turn out!

Author's Response: Yes, that was the original intended purpose! But the main concern with that is that you must remember WHO proposed the idea in the first place. ;)

As for Severus breaking down... well. I can't ascertain yes or no to that just yet, but it may help if I tell you that I see memories as puzzle pieces for the brain. And for Sev right now, all the puzzle pieces where Beth's face appears have been removed from his mind. It's a sort of confusing thing, but Sirius and James and Beth know what they're doing, I promise!

I'm glad that this story is unpredictable for you, though! I do mean that, too -- it means that the suspense I'm trying to integrate is working. ♥ I hope you'll keep returning to find out what's going on!


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