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Review:Debra20 says:
Ok so Athene, why have you been hiding these stories from me until now? You should definitely advertise them more because this piece is raw gold. It's so, so beautiful! I can't even begin to express how amazed I was by the power of your descriptions. You have such a good grip on imagery and on sensory description!

When Hermione stands in front of the ocean and watches Ron and you describe the ocean around her, you can almost taste the salty air, feel it fill your nostrils and spread through your body. I had such a surreal experience with this, you can't even begin to imagine. Not to mention that it was filled with emotion.

I'm very happy you decided to write this as a moment of peace in their terrible days at that present time. It's a breath of fresh air both for them, with all the running around and going into hiding from the Death Eaters, and for us following them with bated breath. I honestly enjoy action/adventure stories and stories with a faster pace, but when one of this one comes along, where everything is pure description and feel, I can sit back, take a break and enjoy it's beauty. You are so talented!

Author's Response: I don't really know how to advertise my stories! Haha! I promise I'm not hiding them!

I honestly don't know what to say to this incredible review... I'm utterly thrilled that it made you feel this way! And I do love the little lost moments... I'm considering writing a series of them.

Thanks again!
Athene xo

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