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Review:patronus_charm says:
I am so sorry for how long this review took, I was away for a week without my laptop, and phone reviews just make me want to throw the phone at the wall, anyway on with the review :D

I loved your characterisation of Victoire, it was so refreshing to have her with a sort of man up streak as I've never seen it done before, and it just made me laugh so much. It seemed to suite her a lot too, and I can just imagine her berating everyone to be braver!

I really liked your characterisation of the other cousins too, as they all seemed to have unqiue personalities not just the same ones. I also liked how you showed tension between them all, and that they weren't all the best of friends.

I was a bit wary of the format when I first saw it, but I grew to really like it, and it seemed to match Victoire's jumping thoughts about what to do.

The use of the quote was really good too. And the way you showed the next gen characters was really refreshing too.

I thought this was a really great start to the story, and the results should be posted soon :D

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: It's fine!! Ergh, phone reviews are so frustrating, I know what it's like -_-

I'm really pleased you like Victoire - she's such an interesting character - and I didn't want her to be pathetic and really girly.

I was quite aware of all the varying cousins, and I didn't want them to all blend together, so that's lovely of you to mention! I wanted the reader to be able to decipher some of the cousins - and some of the relationships. I've always loved having a range of characters, and creating unique traits for each one.

Thank you for such a lovely review - you're awesome - and it's the most awesome and clever challenge I've seen! Mumford and Sons are just so awesome! :)

-Soph :3

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