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Review:Jchrissy says:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! So I was searching through the people who have yet to leave reviews, but then decided for such a special birthday i wanted to leave it myself ♥

I hope today is all about you and that you get to have some serious fun, and get lovely presents and cake!!! hehe!!

This was such a sweet one shot. I like that you used just a small thing that most people don't think about, getting one another Christmas gifts, and gave it its very own one shot. Christmas is already such a romantic time that I just felt myself get all fuzzy and feelsy.

The fun banter at the start with Sirius teasing Lily and James, then between Moony and Sirius, was so awesome. I loved that Remus was looking up the laws regarding Sirius's flying motorbike. It seems so Remus-sh, and then even better that Sirius hadn't even asked him to look it up. Haha! They're the best, this group is.

Sirius's impatient nature was so fun to watch coming through in this. His constant need to be doing something, whether it's teasing his friends or passing the ball back and forth. And then I was really happy when you added Peter in as Lily and James were going upstairs!

The gifts were so sweet. I think it's so hard to think of presents, and I love how personable you made both gifts. The nervousness that Lily felt upon giving James his was so precious. I just wanted to hug her.

This was such a delightful little one shot, Adele ♥!!! It's smooth and sweet, although it did make me want Christmas time to come back!


Happy birthday, lovely ♥

Author's Response: Naw, Jami! You're too good to me. ^_^

And I had way too much fun writing this. It was originally for a Drabble exchange on Tumblr, but then it was long enough to be a one-shot, so I thought 'why not?' and uploaded it.

Trying to come up with original gifts for the two of them was a total pain, but now that I've got the ideas it's very 'how the hell did I not think of it before?'

I'm so glad you enjoyed the characterization, and the one-shot in general. It's really made my day. ^_^

- Adele. xx


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