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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
Ooh, so I was scrolling through your Author Page looking for something to review and voila. I came across this. I've been following it for quite some time now, and was excited to review it. (I must admit, I'm bad at reviewing unless I've someone specifically telling me they want one, haha).

Everything about this drew me in. The summary made me want the chapter, the first few lines had me craving the rest, the everything made me want everything more.

The style you have of writing is unique. (Not just your use of second person.) There's just something about it that is different.

Your flow is fantastic, and your characters really come to life. You almost put me in the story along with all them. (Haha, ironic) Well, actually, you made me realise that Molly and I are exactly alike. Yenno, minus the whole Witch-y thing and all that jazz.

The prolouge totally makes me want to come back for more (which I totally have done and am caught up and LOVING IT)

Great story,

Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you so much for stopping by and having a look at this - it's so lovely to hear you say that, thank you! :)

Gah, thank you so much! :) I'm so glad you like it - summaries are always so hard and beginnings are something I always struggle with feeling happy with, so I'm so glad you liked both of them!

I'm so happy you like the flow (because I know I write a lot of description which tends to make it slow), and the characters. I really wanted Molly to be likeable and realistic, so the fact that you empathise with her is so great to hear! And yeah, perhaps not a good thing, necessarily, considering the story :P

Gah, thank you so so much! For the review, and for all the lovely compliments and just for reading and following and enjoying in general! :)

Aph xx

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