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Review:TheHistoryGirl says:
Hey, it's THG(Liv) from the forums with your promised review. I was scrolling through your authors page and the banner for this story just jumped out at me because it's so gorgeous!
I really enjoyed this and it even got a few laughs out of me. I definitely think that the strongest thing you've got going here is Darcy's character. She's very likeable and easy to relate to for me; she seems really upfront and unprepared to allow other people to walk all over her which is a really good trait to have in a main character. I also really enjoyed the general flow of humour and the way you've characterised the other Next Gen kids here; Louis in particular was well done. I've always imagined him to seem initially pompous and dislikeable given that he's the son of Fleur Delacour.
If I had to offer any criticism I'd just suggest slowing the pace down slightly; you seem to use the conjunction 'and' a lot as though you're perhaps subconciously in a hurry to get everything down. It's just a minor, barely noticeable flaw but I figured I had to put something out there otherwise it wouldn't be a very helpful review.
But over all I really enjoyed this! It was great read.

Author's Response: Hi Liv! Thank you so much for checking out this story! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
You know, you're one of the only people who hasn't immediately gravitated to Louis, and instead has commented on Darcy being such a strong character. That really means a lot to me, and I'm thrilled that you can relate to her!!! I think I tend to write really fast when I'm excited about a story, and it would be good for me to really focus on slowing the pace down a bit! Thank you for pointing that out to me! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and thank you so much for the sweet review!
Cassie :)

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