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Review:nott theodore says:
Tag!

Okay. Erm...wow?

I've actually been meaning to come and read this story for the last week and haven't got here yet, so when I saw you'd posted in the review tag, I couldn't let the opportunity go to waste. And your Bellatrix seems quite legendary from what I've seen on the forums, so I was really excited before I even read this!

I am sitting here in awe of the first sentence! It gripped me immediately and I wanted to know what the legend was. I've never read a story using second person POV on this site, but it was really effective. It felt quite creepy and sinister, as though an omniscient character was making a prophecy to her.

You capture Bellatrix so perfectly. The narrative was kind of chaotic and really reflected her insanity, plus the comments made about being above everyone but her Lord fit in so well with her character. I have so many favourite sentences just from this short prologue that I can't list them all!

I really love this story already. It's so original, unique and completely compelling that I'm trying to stop myself from waffling on in amazement.

Okay, I'm going to submit this review and read on to the next chapter now!

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: Awww I can't even tell you how happy it makes me that you've heard stuff about my Bellatrix!!!

Second person PoV is becoming a new little addiction for me. It seems to work in these situations where you don't want things to be clear or really understandable but more... blurry.

Ohh I'm so happy you described the narration as chaotic! That's just what I was going for!! Eek I want to hug you!

Thank you so much for stopping by! I'm so lucky to have gotten such an awesome review tagger!

Thank you! ♥ Jami


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