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Review:TheHouseElf says:
Oh Val! What can I say? Another beautiful chapter! WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME?!

Your descriptions are just brilliant, they're original and I can immediately see everything that you are describing to me. I feel as if I am there, in France, in the war. You have a talent my dear ;)

Your characterisations are great too. We got to see some friction in the group which made it all the more realistic to me, nothing is ever plain sailing. And Johanna's flashback, oh gawsh, I just want to squish the woman and tell her that she's going to be alright and gah! I feel like curling up into a ball and crying, poor woman.

The death of the mayor was well written, especially with everyone turning away and high tailing it out of the area as soon as possible as you'd expect them to do- it wasn't easy killing him :P I feel though that it was a bit short in comparison to the chapter and it was all over very quickly... apart from that, amazing!

I cannot tell you how much I am addicted to this story! You'd better get that 4th chapter out soon or I'm coming for you Val...

Author's Response: I am responding to this even though I have five other reviews waiting because seriously ALL OF THE FEELS.

Psh, I attempt to be awesome only because there are people like you who make me want to improve.

I'm so glad you like the description! I'm actually having a lot of fun trying to imagine them in my head, and it's great to hear that it goes from my head to the screen without sounding off.

Nope, plain sailing does not exist here, and this is just the beginning.

Johanna needs all the squishes she can get, though she's made of stronger stuff than it would it seem! (Simon is going to be needing many squishes too after you read the next chapter.)

I am so relieved you liked the scene with the mayor -- I'm completely oblivious to the quality of an action/tension scene, so I didn't know how it was going to work out... And I will go and reread to see how I can edit, but right now it's half past two in the morning and I keep pressing the wrong keys on my keyboard, so I think it's better if I wait until later today.

*hides* Chapter four is about a third written up so far, expect it fairly soon! After that I'm on holiday, so I'm going to try and get lots of prewritten chapters.


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