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Review:Debra20 says:
KATIE! You little mischief-maker!! I still can't stop laughing from the shock I had when I read the ending. I finally understand all those tweets you kept having with Ral about using a banner with Draco and Hermione. You should definitely advertise this story more. It's brilliant in its twist. Boy, that was a real shocker...

Dramione is really not my cup of wine, but Ral kept going "read it, it's so good!" and then I said, why not? I really commend you on your style and your usage of visual description. I say this in every review I have for stories with a similar style: I LOVE adverbs. I love stories that entice readers with sensory descriptions. I think they're amazing and grab a reader like no other type can. So congrats on that aspect :D

And the twist. Seriously, THE TWIST! I'm VERY sceptical (to say the least) about Dramiones and not a particular fan of stories that have Ron as a cheater or an abusive spouse, just so that it can give an explanation on why Hermione hooks with Draco. For more than half of this story I thought you were talking about Draco and Hermione and she had dyed her hair. I was SO not expecting that at the end. Brilliant!!!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA!! Indeed I am a mischief-maker! Call me Minnie the Minx! (Do they have the Beano in Romania?) And thank you so much for taking a chance on this one-shot!

I agree with you - although in the UK we say my cup of tea - that's why I was motivated to write this in the first place. *hugs Ral* I'm really glad that you liked my sensory descriptions - I was flailing around trying not to repeat myself or say "his ginger hair" by accident :')

YES THE TWIST ♥ Having written Ron as a cheater, I think it can actually be done in a story - although I agree with you, it sucks when he cheats with some random girl just so Hermione and Draco can get together. I could write an essay on the reasons Ron cheated with Astoria, but I won't here - if you want to know more about the reasons behind his actions, just PM or tweet me ♥

Once again, thank you so much for reviewing, Roxana! And I apologize for the delay in responding to this!


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