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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! Sorry it's been so long since I've read and reviewed, it really seems as though I have no time for reading fanfiction these days (sob!) But I wanted to spend my time on your fantabulous story!

Okay, this review isn't going to be super long because I really want to keep reading. I am so curious about Fern - where is she going, if anywhere? Has something happened to her? I can't wait to find out the answers! And her friendship with Peeves is so cute, and I've never seen anything like that done before! I definitely think it adds an original twinge to your story.

I actually like the fact that there is so much schoolwork in your story because, lets be honest, that's what school is about! There is not as much socializing and partying as many people make it out to be, so I am super happy to see that you are actually including the classes in your chapters. And that's part of the magic of Hogwarts, too - all the different classes and kinds of spells.

Finally, I had a feeling something with Louis and Autumn was going on, and the last little scene with them was perfect! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in Hogsmeade.


Author's Response: Courtney!

No need to apologise, honestly -- RL getting in the way of fanfic is really irritating, and I've found myself sobbing more than once too!

Fern is a mystery that you will find out about later, but I won't say anything there because it's an important part of the plot. I'm happy you like her friendship with Peeves!

The reason I include so much schoolwork is because I went sifting through the forums and there was a thread of stereotypes that irritate the reader. One that often came back was 'all Next Gen ever does is party', so I went down the other road with this story! I'm also not a big party person myself, and writing about something you're unfamiliar with is difficult...

Louis and Autumn, no, I have no idea what you're on about.

Thank you for your review :)

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